I love the angle of this, it is a different perspective than you usually see walking down the hall! I would definitely keep the very low angle, but face up just a bit more to see the top of the lockers and a bit of the ceiling. Really fill the frame with the entire scene.
Another option, if you wanted the focus to be on the carpet, would be to add a pile of books, like someone had just dropped them, to fill the "dead space" the carpet takes up. It would also help tell a bit of a story!
I like the angle of this picture a lot. I'd like to see less carpet though.
ReplyDeleteI do love the angle too like Mrs. Petersen and I agree maybe a little less carpet but maybe also try a little more black-and-white
ReplyDeleteI love the angle but I feel like its a bit plain.
ReplyDeleteI love the angle idea maybe put like matte frame
ReplyDeleteI love the angle of this, it is a different perspective than you usually see walking down the hall! I would definitely keep the very low angle, but face up just a bit more to see the top of the lockers and a bit of the ceiling. Really fill the frame with the entire scene.
ReplyDeleteAnother option, if you wanted the focus to be on the carpet, would be to add a pile of books, like someone had just dropped them, to fill the "dead space" the carpet takes up. It would also help tell a bit of a story!
Great job!
The angle is great but it needs a little more scenery
ReplyDeleteI really like the angle but I think it needs a to be more clear;)
ReplyDeleteI really like this picture but the lockers in it would be nice
ReplyDeleteIt looks good but a different angle could do better! Good job!
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