Nice math terms.:P I do like the light coming through the windows. I wish the parking lot wasn't so busy in the background. It distracts from the shapes. I wondering if you could find a different doorway that would provide the same shapes, but less cars?
Great idea, great shapes. I would try to get higher and only include the upper windows in the frame, if you can. The background in the lower windows is very distracting and takes all of my attention. Aim for a higher vantage point. :)
I really like the idea and the lighting as we'll but I think if your going for the top getting a higher angle and cropping a little out of the bottom windows it would look better (:
Nice math terms.:P I do like the light coming through the windows. I wish the parking lot wasn't so busy in the background. It distracts from the shapes. I wondering if you could find a different doorway that would provide the same shapes, but less cars?
ReplyDeleteGreat idea, great shapes. I would try to get higher and only include the upper windows in the frame, if you can. The background in the lower windows is very distracting and takes all of my attention. Aim for a higher vantage point. :)
ReplyDeleteMaybe a different filter and a better angle
ReplyDeleteI agree the parking lot is a little busy, but I like the main idea:)
ReplyDeleteI like how the like how the light comes through the windows as we'll! But I think a straighter angle would be nice! Good job though!:)
ReplyDeleteI like the main idea but it would look better if it wasn't so dark
ReplyDeleteA different angle would help with the background :)
ReplyDeleteI really like the idea and the lighting as we'll but I think if your going for the top getting a higher angle and cropping a little out of the bottom windows it would look better (:
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